雅思大作文考官范文 第1篇
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual
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What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
工作满意度的影响因素，期望所有的劳动者都满意现实么?
剑雅考官参考范文：
Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that
Employees get job satisfaction in a number of Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superior is very important in his A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is a sense of progress and purpose that rewards a The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for the loyal to a
Of course not everyone enjoys their Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job
However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any If the factors identified above implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job (303words)
雅思大作文考官范文 第2篇
第一：写
要练习写雅思真题。雅思真题可以练剑桥雅思系列的。只有练了雅思真题才能对于雅思的出题思路和题目构成有清晰完整的了解。在练习的时候要注意应该在规定时间内完成。只有在有时间限制的压力下写作，考生才能在考试的时候发挥自如。在练习写作的时候也不一定非得要写完整的文章，有时候可以进行段落论证的写作。比如，专门花时间练一练开头段或结尾段的写作。有时把文章分解了写可以更能磨练写作技巧。有时候也可以专门练习某种论证手法的写作，甚至对于常用的句型可以进行造句练习。在练习频率上，基本应该保持两天写一篇以上。
第二：读
如果只是一味埋头苦练的话，那只能提高写作速度而在写作水平上不一定会有长足的进步。只有看了好的文章，考生才会知道应该往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。最重要的是要看考官写的例文，比如剑桥大学出的CambridgeIELTS2以及CambridgeIELTS3等。看的时候不要只看懂就行，而要着眼于三个方面：考官范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的，运用了哪些论证手法;范文是怎么安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的，运用了哪些衔接手段;范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。如果考生能够举一反三，仔细思考并且适当借鉴的话，那么看一篇就会有一篇的受益。除了考官范文以外，其它的一些优秀范文也可以参考。各种精彩段落，包括雅思阅读文章里面的一些论证方法和有用表达也可以成为学习的对象。
第三：改
有时候考生越看范文会越觉得郁闷甚至沮丧，因为发现自己的低水平文章和高分作文之间似乎存在着不可逾越的巨大鸿沟。要想跨越这条鸿沟，弥补其中的差距，关键在多修改。考生应该自己先在规定时间内完成作文，然后对照范文，看看自己作文中存在的问题。有没有审题错误?结构是否混乱?有没有表达不清的地方?然后仔细琢磨一下，范文是怎么展开论证的?看数遍范文以后可以试着根据刚才学习范文的体会和收获来修改自己原先写过的文章，把论证不够充分的地方重新论证一下，关联不当的地方修补一下，错误表达改正过来。当然，如果能够有老师的指导，效果会更好。这样，练一篇，看一篇，改一遍。写一次就会有一次的收获。
雅思大作文考官范文 第3篇
题目：As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文：
Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.
On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
雅思大作文考官范文 第4篇
本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of To what extent do you agree or disagree?在当世，保护野生动物纯属浪费钱财。同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。
范文：
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for I completely disagree with this point of
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect
(269 words, band 9)
雅思大作文考官范文 第5篇
The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university.
Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.
Model Answer:
I think it is a great idea to build a new university in my community. However, I think it is a controversial question whether the building of a new university will bring only benefits to our community. In this essay I will analyze advantages and disadvantages of this issue and present my view in favor of establishing a new university in my community.
From the one side, establishing a new university in my community brings many benefits. First of all, a new construction means more job opportunities. I think it would be good for my community because many people have to spend much time driving to their work day in and day out because they could not find a job in our neighborhood. Second of all, a new university is a good chance to meet new people and I like this opportunity. Many students will live in our community. Finally, if a new university is built in my community there is a big chance that I will be willing to enroll in it. I think it is great because it is not far from my place and I do not have to move to another part of the city. Another important aspect of this is that people from my community will have a chance to use new libraries and facilities of a new university. For example some people can take courses and classes there.
From the other side, building a new university can bring some disadvantages. A new construction means noise, traffic jams and different kinds of pollution. In addition to these disadvantages, many young people in our community can cause more noise especially in the evenings.
To sum up, I think that I would support the decision of the government of establishing a new university in my community despite a few disadvantages that could follow this construction. I believe that a new university will increase a chance of many young people to get a higher education, gain more knowledge and experience, which will help them to succeed in today’s world.
雅思大作文考官范文 第6篇
题目：Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文：
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
雅思大作文考官范文 第7篇
本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是As well as making money, businesses also have social To what extent do you agree or disagree?除了赚钱，企业还有相应的社会责任，同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。
范文：
Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make
On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial
On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax
In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial
(285 words, band 9)
雅思大作文考官范文 第8篇
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live with huge houses and cars.
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.
Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.
Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.
雅思大作文考官范文 第9篇
题目：As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work， job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
考官范文：
Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole， and because of this， job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.
Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly， a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work， so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly， when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities， for example， then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.
Of course not everyone enjoys their work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring， and labour relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.
However， even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work， I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented， then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.
范文分析：
1、文章结构：结构
一般说来，在段落之间，没有特别的连接词，暗指后面一段在支持前面一段的主题句。
段落之间的关联词：
在第3段的段首，考官使用Of course， 表示切换话题。这个词可以理解为“然而”。
在第4段的段首，考官使用了However， 展示本段是上一段的转折，即论证的补充。这个词组可以理解为“尽管如此”
一般说来，在一个段落内的句子之间，没有特别的连接词，暗指后面一句在支持主题句。
段落中的路标词：在第1段中，考官使用了So来突出主题句。这个词可以理解为“总之”。
2、语法
这篇考官范文在句式上最经典之处就是充分利用了英文的“状语从句”，几乎所有的状语从句在这篇文章中都很好地体现出来了。
全文使用的长难句型如下：
If…， then…（条件状语）
because(原因状语)
… if … because ….（条件状语 + 原因状语）
When…，then…（时间状语）
…， so…（结果状语）
Even though…,…（让步状语）
I think it is not unrealistic to…（我觉得这件事并非不真实……双重否定表示肯定）
…， and…（并列句）
neither…nor…（否定并列句）
以上就是小站整理的考官版雅思写作满分范文，希望这篇文章可以帮助到大家。
雅思大作文考官范文 第10篇
本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?外国游客游览旅游景点应该额外收费。同意与否?精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。
范文：
It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and I completely disagree with this
The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit
If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nation’s cultural If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important
In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local
(269 words, band 9)
雅思大作文考官范文 第11篇
题目：More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
范文：
Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.
The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. Another issue is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems such as high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from city centres and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for example, the introduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the traffic problem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.
In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
雅思大作文考官范文 第12篇
一、雅思写作备考前期：
单词是一篇文章的最小单位，所以对于词汇的掌握是很有必要的。但是在词汇准备的过程中，要注意以下两个问题：
雅思写作对单词量的要求在4000-6000左右，换句话说考生掌握了相当于大学英语六级或以上的词汇水平，就足以应对雅思写作考试了。
对于写作词汇而言，量只是一个最基础的需求，不要盲目地背诵单词，更多的要关注词的应用，比如词组的搭配、词性的辨别和词意的辨析等，为以后写出正确的句子打好基础。
建议考生背词汇时要注意以下几个方面：
l 注意单词的词性，以及不同词性所代表的不同意思;
l 注意动词词组的搭配;
l 多看例句;
l 注意单词的英文解释;
l 注意单词的同义和反义替换
二、雅思写作备考初期：
考生们要注意，语法好是写作会变好的一个前提，但并不是会让写作拿高分的必要因素，句型多样化的灵活运用更为重要。好的句子是好文章的基础，考生要保证句子的准确性，灵活运用句子的多样化。基础薄弱的考生一定要练习写出正确无误的句子，在此基础上，尝试不同句式结构的替换。多多背诵一些与雅思写作相关的句子，这样在以后的雅思写作中才能熟练地用英文表达出自己的想法和观点。基础较好的考生，要注意句子的灵活运用，不要简单的认为写长句就能拿高分，用复杂句就能拿高分。有一些考生特别喜欢用定语从句，写出来的句子效果却是让考官很无语的：
例如：The public should take some actions to deal with the environment which is
上面这个定语从句用的没有太大作用，可以直接将形容词fragile放到environment前面。
三、雅思写作备考中期：
雅思大作文考官范文 第13篇
Children"s lives these days are quite different from our generation"s. Describe what are the biggest changes in younger generation and explain some factors of this phenomenon.
Model Answer:
Over the past few decades, the world has significantly changed. Nowadays, many have begun to wonder what the reasons behind [=for] these changes are. Two major factors contributing to this phenomenon are advances in media and change family dynamics [=organization].
First, advances in media, such as the Internet and TV, have meant that children spend a large portion of their leisure time in front of a screen. Consequently, they are not getting proper amounts of exercise, which results in an increase in the number of children who are overweight and obese. In addition, fast food restaurants have become increasingly popular, which has also contributed to children"s health problems
Moreover, another leading force of this trend is changes in the family unit. Compared with a half century ago, nuclear families have become way more common in modern society. People tend to have only one child, which has caused personality disorders such as depression, loneliness, and selfishness. This is mainly because parents with one child have tendency to put all their focus and money into their only son or daughter. Studies have indicated that over 65% of children who are brought up without siblings show self-centered behavior find it difficult cooperating with their peers.
In summary, there are many factors that have caused children to live very differently from the generation before them. There are high hopes that parents exercise(s) wisdom in treating their children.
雅思大作文考官范文 第14篇
有效的句子要有重点，并且要突出重点。
句子的重点可以通过下列方法，加以突出：
把重点摆在句首或句尾。
一般而论，最显眼的位置是在“句尾，其次是在句首，中间的位置最平淡，乏善可陈。例如：
(1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers"
(2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of
把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法，读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。
在复杂句里，把主句放在从句之后。
除了名词从句和形容词从句之外，因为它们位置较固定，副词从句中有几种的位置灵活，可以在主句之前出现，
也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前，重点则放在后头的主句，如(3b)：
(3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town
(3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old
副词短语更是如此，如 (4b):
(4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its
(4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful
把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头，如(5b)和(6b)：
(5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera
(5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical
(6a) That singer"s life was tragic and
(6b) That singer"s life was brief and
把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如：
(7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to
(8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?
必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。
例如：
(9) Jackie enjoys the company of He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity,
and he likes their
(10) land stretched out without Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the
nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless
尽量用主动说态，因此(11b)比(11a)好：
(11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying
(11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the
适当时候，可用倒装句和平行句，如：
(12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark → Here, in the centre of the dark forest
lived seven
(13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds
(14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain
雅思大作文考官范文 第15篇
没有时间推移，不能转化，怎么办？可以有序、系统、巧妙地对比着写！
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Well, I"ve been asked to talk about how to study English. Well, I"m not sure I"m the best one to talk about this topic since I am just a learner myself, but I will try to give some suggestions based on my own experience.
I advise you first to know what your goals are and your budget. I don"t advise you to go out and spend so much on English books and other things until you know clearly what you want to learn and for what purpose. I mean, if its just conversational English you want to learn, then concentrate on getting communication-style resources. But if you are more interested in studying for a test like this one then it may be best to focus on the types of topics you may be asked. I think you should explore all the various options first. Some my be quite cheap-for example, listening to CRI or English television is free of charge, while other options are more expensive-for example, taking an intensive course at a language school. My own opinion is that you should probably study English in the morning or in the early evening. In other words, try to study it when you first get up because you"ll feel more alert at that time. Trying to study English in the afternoon is like trying to drink a beer in the morning. Somehow it just doesn"t seem to fit.
When you do get what resources you need, I advise you to begin with a good sound base in English. One regret I have in learning English is that I never developed this sound base. I developed a visual base first, and then later had to develop my listening and pronunciation. I would work primarily on listening at first. I wouldn"t force you to speak too early because the experience will be too frustrating, as I found out. Once you do build up your listening, start talking and writing, and then finally do a lot of reading, which will help your English a lot at the latter stages.
I think it"s important to remember that we don"t learn language in any linear way. Also, it is not so simple to say, "the more words you remember the more you can produce." There is a relationship between memory and language, but it is not the only aspect. Creativity and experience using it are equally as important.
I’d like to describe a foreign teacher of mine, Bob. He is tall and strong, with strong muscles. He is a typical American—confident and humorous. He is a very attractive man.
A lot of my classmates liked his class very much. I also chose his course in the second year of my university. At first, I didn’t feel there was anything special about him. Later, I found that he really had the ability to make his class interesting because he was so funny and good at telling jokes. He was also creative. He had so many new ways for us to practice our English.
After class, I like talking with him in both Chinese and English because he also learned some Chinese. Through communicating with him, I learned a lot about western culture.
I need to thank him. Because of him, I feel that English is actually a fun subject to learn. My interest in English grew and now I’m still interested in learning language.
我是一名高二的学生，因为上的是国际部，所以高三毕业前过雅思是必须的。之前听说有高三下学期还未过雅思，造成申请学校不明朗，不能达成自己的心愿，由此家人和我也统一思想，决定对雅思考试早准备，及时开始考不过也不会造成最后压力堆积在一起，但是对雅思考试的具体情况也不是太了解，都是道听途说一些。于是决定上一个雅思培训班，因为新东方是最早开办出国培训的学校，所以对他比较信任，最后选了一个15人精讲班，经过一个多月的培训，确定在11月份先试考一下，不管成绩如何，先看看自己有什么不足之处，以便今后有针对性的训练提高。考完之后在忐忑中终于等来了公布成绩的那一天，算是超常发挥，一次过了。因为考前只听说雅思比较难，考过之后自己觉得还可以，结果自己比较满意，高兴之余，觉得这样的结果，还是有一些前提才会得到的，也就是所谓的心得，与大家分享一下。
首先，有条件的话，还是要上一个正规的雅思培训班，因为是专业的，省去你前期的盲目摸索，能让你在短期内迅速了解雅思考试的特点，掌握应试技巧，全面提高应试能力。我报的这个班，配备的老师都是年轻活力，有海归的，有知名院校毕业的，他们的教学经验丰富，课堂气氛轻松活泼，让你的学习不觉枯燥。像听力课程就是分类讲解各种场景，如银行学校等，这样就比较容易在特定的情景下掌握特定的词汇，还特别讲解了一些易错点，比如如何分析读音相近的两个词，听的时候注意关键词。阅读主要讲的是抓住文章的主干，分析文章的结构，在短时间内抓住主题，他们的方法特别管用，写作也是讲解句子的开头力求多样化，找出起共同点与不同点，用词尽量广泛，一些小小的细节，往往可以改变一篇作文的命运。口语考试要尽量放松自己，自然的与考官沟通。
其次，师傅领进门，修行在个人。上培训班只是老师传授给你方法，领你上路，真正具体繁冗的学习还要自己来做，克服懒惰侥幸心理，认真准备，单词多记，听力多听，写作长练，真题按照考试规定时间掐表做，以适应考试节奏，寻找实战状态。看自己的真实水平，找出差距，发现不足，坚持练习。
再者，雅思注重更多的是表达和理解英语的能力，平时也要主要有意识的提高英语水平，如看原声电影，原版图书歌曲等，这样日积月累，才能从量变到质变。
总之，正确的方法再加上自己的努力，相信付出总会有回报。最后祝所有的烤鸭们和我一样幸运，水到渠成，顺利过关。
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break form studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.
The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge ad experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.
However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.
My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.
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雅思大作文考官范文 第16篇
题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
参考范文：
It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be
On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger
On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and
In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as
雅思大作文考官范文 第17篇
You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live.
What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why?
Model Answer:
I think the question what would I do if I had a chance to improve my community is difficult. I have in my mind many things, the improvement of which will make our community better place to live but they all require the participation of many people and, moreover, they require investments, which I can not provide. For example, my community is quite noisy. We have the huge mall just in front of our community, so traffic jams are very common for this place. I think that the construction of a few pass-by roads will benefit all people who live here as well as people who drive by every day.
Unfortunately, the question is what I can do for my community giving a few hours of my time every month. I think I can not do much, but I still can help someone in my community. For example, I can baby-sit. I know a couple of families with little children, who can not afford to spend much money on the baby-sitter. One of these families is a single mom with a little girl. Julia, this is her name, is a waitress in a restaurant. She is a great person and we became close friends. So, sometimes I offer her help with her child when she has to work in the evenings. Another family has two funny little twins. One time their parents asked me to babysit their children because they had to attend an unexpected presentation.
I think this kind of help brings many benefits to my community. First of all, people become friendlier. For example, those families, which I mentioned above, became friends after I introduced them to each other. Second of all, people get to know each other and feel more secure in their houses and apartments. Finally, I am ready to help those people because I am sure that they will help me too. One time I lost the keys from my car and Julia offered me her car for a while.
To sum up, I believe that baby-sitting is a great way to help my community in many aspects.
雅思大作文考官范文 第18篇
题目：Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官范文：
People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.
On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully.
On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do
not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.
In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced.
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